Chương 340: Đi La Lan tinh

thought* *Scene 1:* Ninh Thanh and Su Quynh Hoa arrive at a remote mountain range in the northernmost part of Thien Chau. The area is spiritually barren and plagued by whirlwinds. They are looking for a teleportation array to Roland Star. Su Quynh Hoa enters the Small World (miniature world) so Ninh Thanh can proceed alone. * *Scene 2:* Back in Bac Y Town, Ly Linh Pham is being interrogated by several Hoa Dinh (Soul Transformation) cultivators, including Duong Quang Hi. Ly Linh Pham plays dumb and uses his status as a Thien Dao Sect disciple to resist. However, he receives a message that a Hoa Dinh elder from his sect is coming, meaning he won't be able to hide Ninh Thanh's whereabouts much longer. * *Scene 3:* Ninh Thanh reaches the gray buildings housing the teleportation array. He passes a security check by a To Than (Spirit Shaping) cultivator and some Hoa Dinh cultivators' divine sense. One cultivator notices his hidden ring (Small World) but can't break the seal. Ninh Thanh pays a high fee (3 million spirit stones and 2 premium spirit stones) and is teleported just minutes before an arrest order arrives. * *Scene 4:* The teleportation is extremely painful and disorienting. Ninh Thanh lands on Roland Star, loses consciousness briefly, and is immediately attacked by a creature. He fights back, and Su Quynh Hoa joins him. She identifies the creature as a Tinh Phong (Astral Wind) beast. They discuss the environment of Roland Star, which is bad for cultivation but great for body tempering. Su Quynh Hoa offers to take him somewhere special.

* Ninh Thành: Main character, cautious, resourceful. * Sư Quỳnh Hoa: His wife/companion, knowledgeable, supportive. * Đường Quang Hi: Antagonist, arrogant but wary of the Thien Dao Sect. * Lý Linh Phàm: Friend, loyal but under immense pressure. * Terms: Roland tinh (Roland Star), Thiên Châu (Thien Chau), Hóa Đỉnh (Soul Transformation/Hoa Dinh), Tố Thần (Spirit Shaping/To Than), Nguyên Hồn (Original Soul/Nguyen Hon), Bão Dương thần công (Bao Duong Divine Art), Luyện Thể (Body Tempering).

* *Opening:* "Một lúc lâu sau..." -> "Một lúc lâu sau, tại một dãy núi linh khí cạn kiệt phía cực bắc Thiên Châu..." (Make it more evocative). * *Interrogation:* Ly Linh Pham's dialogue should reflect his cleverness and the tension. "Đường tiền bối nói là ai a?" -> "Đường tiền bối đang nhắc đến ai vậy? Vừa rồi ta gặp gỡ rất nhiều bằng hữu..." * *The Checkpoint:* Ninh Thanh's internal monologue about the hidden ring. "Tiểu thế giới" -> "Tiểu thế giới". "Trận đạo cao thủ" -> "Cao thủ trận đạo". * *Teleportation:* Describe the "tearing pain" (xé rách đau đớn). "Cảm giác được từng đợt xé rách đau đớn" -> "Cảm nhận được từng cơn đau đớn như muốn xé xác". * *Arrival on Roland Star:* The fight with the Tinh Phong beast. "Tinh phong" (foul wind/beast's breath). "Oanh" -> "Oành" or "Uỳnh".

* *Self-Correction during drafting:* * "Bính vận khí" -> "Cầu may". * "Ăn định ta Thiên Đạo môn" -> "Nghĩ Thiên Đạo môn ta dễ bắt nạt". * "Kẻ hai mặt" -> "Ba phải/Trục lợi". * "Tinh phong" (in the beast fight) means a "stinking/foul wind" typical of monsters.

* *Drafting the climax of the conversation:* Su Quynh Hoa's smile. "Thiếu chút nữa ngây người" -> "Suýt chút nữa thì ngây người". "Thượng thiên đưa cho hắn đẹp nhất phong cảnh" -> "Món quà tuyệt mỹ nhất mà thượng đế ban tặng".